Evaluation: No Paid Maternity Leave for Mom Whon Used Surrogate Headline-4 Supporting Details-3 Who, What, When, Where, Why, How-4 Lead Sentence-3 Spelling and Grammar-4
I think that the reason we use the newpaper article writing process is because it helps us give usable knowlege to the audience in an easy manner. I don't think that the format should be changed because it is easy to use and works.
I think this process is very effective. It mkaes the reader have to evaluate all their data and make sure that they have every aspect of the article. I don't this that format should be changed because this is something that i actually understand and can be well exicuted.
I feel that the reason behind the newspaper articles format is because it helps get the point out to the reader without losing their attention. I do not think that the fromat should be changed because there is not any visable faults in it and it seems to be effective.
I think the reason that the format is so ridgid is because then the gist of all information can be understood more clearly, and I don't think it should be changed. The "rigid format", I think, shouldn't be changed because it's clear, straight forward, easy to use, and familiar. @Keahi, you got your evaluation on the wrong page.
The newspaper writing process, I think, is a good way to simply state the information one needs about an event and give it to the reader as easy as possible. The rigid simple format of the newspaper article is so rigid because it allows facts to be presented to a reader easily and it allows the reader not to waste time reading an entire essay on a movie they want to see, instead they can just view a simple review and rating for the movie. This format is very good and if it was going to be changed it would have happened by now, so it really shouldn't be changed.
@Michelle Paige Ketchum... Those are some good ideas, I agree with that. Maybe, you could have included something about how it is efficient and saves time for the writer and the reader to use this format. Good job.
The newspaper writing process is rigid because the process and information needs to be understood by the reader and they need to have sufficient information to proceed with the task. I don't think the format needs to be changed. @ Edie Hall - your commentary was straightforward and simple.
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Evaluation:
No Paid Maternity Leave for Mom Whon Used Surrogate
Headline-4
Supporting Details-3
Who, What, When, Where, Why, How-4
Lead Sentence-3
Spelling and Grammar-4
Bibliography:
http://www.hlntv.com/article/2012/04/23/maternity-leave-denied-surrogate-mom-jane-kassim
I think that the reason we use the newpaper article writing process is because it helps us give usable knowlege to the audience in an easy manner. I don't think that the format should be changed because it is easy to use and works.
I think this process is very effective. It mkaes the reader have to evaluate all their data and make sure that they have every aspect of the article. I don't this that format should be changed because this is something that i actually understand and can be well exicuted.
I feel that the reason behind the newspaper articles format is because it helps get the point out to the reader without losing their attention. I do not think that the fromat should be changed because there is not any visable faults in it and it seems to be effective.
I think the reason that the format is so ridgid is because then the gist of all information can be understood more clearly, and I don't think it should be changed. The "rigid format", I think, shouldn't be changed because it's clear, straight forward, easy to use, and familiar.
@Keahi, you got your evaluation on the wrong page.
The newspaper writing process, I think, is a good way to simply state the information one needs about an event and give it to the reader as easy as possible. The rigid simple format of the newspaper article is so rigid because it allows facts to be presented to a reader easily and it allows the reader not to waste time reading an entire essay on a movie they want to see, instead they can just view a simple review and rating for the movie. This format is very good and if it was going to be changed it would have happened by now, so it really shouldn't be changed.
@Michelle Paige Ketchum...
Those are some good ideas, I agree with that. Maybe, you could have included something about how it is efficient and saves time for the writer and the reader to use this format. Good job.
The newspaper writing process is rigid because the process and information needs to be understood by the reader and they need to have sufficient information to proceed with the task. I don't think the format needs to be changed. @ Edie Hall - your commentary was straightforward and simple.
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