Article Title: Michael Phelps says he will retire after London Olympics
Headline: 4; Article has a headline that captures the reader's attention and accurately describes the content.
Supporting Details: 4; The details in the article are clear and supportive of the topic.
Who, What, When, Where, Why, How: 4; Article adequately addresses the 5 W's and the H (who, what, when, where and how). Quote used to support person’s input.
Lead Sentence: 4; Lead sentence grabs the reader's attention and focuses the reader on the topic.
Spelling and Grammar: 4; No grammar or spelling errors.
Simon, Mallory, . "Michael Phelps says he will retire after London Olympics." CNN 07 May 2012, n. pag. 0. .
Soldier Who Died While Skype Chatting Was Not Shot, Army Concludes
Headline-4 Supporting Detail-4 Who, what, when, where, why, how-3 Lead sentence-4 Spelling and grammar-4
Bibliography: CURRY, COLLEEN. "Soldier Who Died While Skype Chatting Was Not Shot, Army Concludes." ABC News. ABC News Network, 07 May 2012. Web. 07 May 2012. .
Evaluation: Female Breasts Are Bigger Than Ever, But Under Threat Headline- 4 Supporting Details-3 Five W's- 3 Lead Sentence- 4 Spelling and Grammar-4 Bib-JAMES, SUSAN DONALDSON. "Female Breasts Are Bigger Than Ever, But Under Threat." ABC News. ABC News Network, 07 May 2012. Web. 07 May 2012. .
Evaluation: U.S. Confirms Airstrike Wrongly Killed 6 in Afghan Family Headline - 4 Supporting details - 4 Who, what, when, where, why, how - 4 Lead sentence - 3 Spelling and grammar - 4 Bib - Nordland, Rod. "U.S. Confirms Airstrike Wrongly Killed 6 Afghan Family Members." The New York Times. The New York Times, 08 May 2012. Web. 07 May 2012.
Dermatologist: Don't make fun of 'Tan Mom' By Dr. Jessica Wu Headline= 4 Supporting Details= 4 Five W's= 3 Lead Sentence= 3 Spelling/Grammar= 4 Bibliography: Wu, Jessica. "Dermatologist: Don't Make Fun of 'Tan Mom'" HLNtv.com. Turner Broadcasting System Inc., 07 May 2012. Web. 07 May 2012. .
Evaluation: A Regime's Tight Grip on AIDS Headline- 3 Supporting details- 4 Who, what, when, where, why, how- 4 Lead sentence- 3 Spelling and grammer- 4 Bib- The New York Times. The New York Times. Web. 07 May 2012. .
Evaluation: Applying Cybertechniques to Urban Problems
Headline- 3 Supporting details- 4 Five W's- 4 Lead sentence- 4 Spelling and grammar- 4
Bio: Press, the Associated. "Applying Cybertechniques to Urban Problems." the New York Times Business Day Technology. TNYT, 07 May 2012. Web. 07 May 2012
Evaluation: Applying Cybertechniques to Urban Problems
Headline- 3 Supporting details- 4 Five W's- 4 Lead sentence- 4 Spelling and grammar- 4
Bio: Press, the Associated. "Applying Cybertechniques to Urban Problems." the New York Times Business Day Technology. TNYT, 07 May 2012. Web. 07 May 2012
Evaluation- Cycle of Fear Headline-4 Supporting Details-4 Who, What, When, Where, Why, How-3 Lead Sentence-4 Spelling and Grammar-4 Bib- Kreider, Tim. "Cycle of Fear". www.opinionator.logs.nytimes. May 7th, 2012.
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Avengers Smashes US Box Office Records
Headline- 4
Supporting details- 3
Who, what, when, where, why, how- 2
Lead sentence- 4
Spelling and grammer- 4
Bib-
"Avengers Smashes US Box Office Record." BBC News. BBC, 05 June 2012. Web. 07 May 2012. .
Article Evaluation- Socotra: Unspoiled Island Sanctuary
By: Catriona, Davies
Headline= 4
Supporting Details= 4
Five W's= 3
Lead Sentence= 4
Spelling/Grammar= 4
Davies, Catriona. "Socotra: Unspoiled Island Sanctuary Caught on Camera - CNN.com." CNN. Cable News Network, 01 Jan. 1970. Web. 07 May 2012. .
ABC NEWS-Fat Forecast: 42% of Americans Obese by 2030, written by: Carrie Gann
Headline:4
Details:4
5 W's:4
Lead Sentence:4
Spelling/Grammer:4
"Fat Forecast: 42% of Americans Obese by 2030." ABC News. ABC News Network. Web. 07 May 2012. .
Article Title: Michael Phelps says he will retire after London Olympics
Headline: 4; Article has a headline that captures the reader's attention and accurately describes the content.
Supporting Details: 4; The details in the article are clear and supportive of the topic.
Who, What, When, Where, Why, How: 4; Article adequately addresses the 5 W's and the H (who, what, when, where and how). Quote used to support person’s input.
Lead Sentence: 4; Lead sentence grabs the reader's attention and focuses the reader on the topic.
Spelling and Grammar: 4; No grammar or spelling errors.
Simon, Mallory, . "Michael Phelps says he will retire after London Olympics." CNN 07 May 2012, n. pag. 0. .
Soldier Who Died While Skype Chatting Was Not Shot, Army Concludes
Headline-4
Supporting Detail-4
Who, what, when, where, why, how-3
Lead sentence-4
Spelling and grammar-4
Bibliography:
CURRY, COLLEEN. "Soldier Who Died While Skype Chatting Was Not Shot, Army Concludes." ABC News. ABC News Network, 07 May 2012. Web. 07 May 2012. .
Fat Forecast:42% of Americans obese by 2030
Headline:4
Upporting details:4
The 5 W's and the H:3
Lead sentence:4
Spelling and grammar:4
Bibliography:
"Fat Forecast: 42% of Americans Obese by 2030." ABC News. ABC News Network. Web. 07 May 2012. .
Evaluation
'The Avengers' smashes domestic box office record for opening weekend
Headline: 4
Supporting Details: 4
Who, what, when, where, why, how: 4
Lead sentence: 4
Spelling and grammar: 4
Bibliography
Staff, CNN Wire, and CNNMoney's Chris Isidore. "'The Avengers' Smashes Domestic Box Office Record for Opening Weekend - CNN.com." CNN. Cable News Network, 01 Jan. 1970. Web. 07 May 2012. .
Fat Cat 'Meow' Dies
Evaluation:
Headline- 4
Supporting Details- 3
Who,What,When,Where,Why,How- 4
Lead Sentence- 4
Spelling and Grammar- 4
Bibliography:
ABC News, . "Fat Cat 'Meow' Dies." http://gma.yahoo.com/blogs/abc-blogs/fat-cat-meow-dies-162743243--abc-news-topstories.html. N.p., n.d. Web. 7 May 2012.
Evaluation:
Female Breasts Are Bigger Than Ever, But Under Threat
Headline- 4
Supporting Details-3
Five W's- 3
Lead Sentence- 4
Spelling and Grammar-4
Bib-JAMES, SUSAN DONALDSON. "Female Breasts Are Bigger Than Ever, But Under Threat." ABC News. ABC News Network, 07 May 2012. Web. 07 May 2012. .
Evaluation:
Fat Cat 'Meow' Dies
Headline- 3
Supporting details- 4
Who, what, when, where, why, how- 2
Lead sentence- 4
Spelling and grammar- 4
"Fat Cat ‘Meow’ Dies." ABC News. ABC News Network, 7 May 2012. Web. 07 May 2012. .
Article Title: Fat Cat 'Meow' Dies
Headline~ 3
Supporting Details~ 4
5 W's~ 3
Lead Sentence~ 4
Spelling and Grammer~ 4
ABC news. "Fat Cat 'Meow' Dies." ABC News. ABC, 07 May May 2012. 07 May 2012
Article Evaluation-CNN-"So you're a Cyborg--now what?"
Headline- 4
Supporting Details- 4
Five W's- 4
Lead Sentence- 3
Spelling/Grammar- 4
Landau, Elizabeth. "So You're a Cyborg -- Now What? - CNN.com." CNN. Cable News Network, 01 Jan. 1970. Web. 07 May 2012. .
Evaluation:
U.S. Confirms Airstrike Wrongly Killed 6 in Afghan Family
Headline - 4
Supporting details - 4
Who, what, when, where, why, how - 4
Lead sentence - 3
Spelling and grammar - 4
Bib - Nordland, Rod. "U.S. Confirms Airstrike Wrongly Killed 6 Afghan Family Members." The New York Times. The New York Times, 08 May 2012. Web. 07 May 2012.
Fat Cat 'MEOW' Dies
Headline: 4
Supprting Details:3
5 W's: 5
Lead sentence:4.5
Spelling and Grammar:4
BIO: ABC News. "Fat Cat 'Meow' Dies." Yahoo! ABC News Network. Web. 07 May 2012. .
Fat Cat 'MEOW' Dies
Headline: 4
Supprting Details:3
5 W's: 5
Lead sentence:4.5
Spelling and Grammar:4
BIO: ABC News. "Fat Cat 'Meow' Dies." Yahoo! ABC News Network. Web. 07 May 2012. .
42% of nation to be obese by 2030, study predicts
Heading- 4
Supporting Detail- 4
Who,what,when,where,why,how?- 4
Lead Sentence- 3
Spelling and grammar- 4
"42% of Nation to Be Obese by 2030, Study Predicts." CNN.com. Web. 07 May 2012. .
Article: Yogurt Makes Mice Slimer, Sexier
Headline=4
Supporting details=4
Who, what, when, where, why, how=3
Lead sentence=4
Spelling and grammar=4
Moisse, Katie. "Yogurt Makes Mice Slimmer, Sexier." ABC News. ABC News Network. Web. 07 May 2012. .
Article: Arkansas Inmate on Crime Spree Steals Cop's Gun, Shoots His Dog
Headline- 4
Supporting Details- 4
Who,what,when,where,why,how- 3
Lead Sentence- 4
Spelling and Grammer- 4
Evaluation:
"A Regime’s Tight Grip on AIDS"
Category: Health
Headline: 4
Supporting Details: 4
who,what,where,when,why,how: 4
Lead Sentence: 4
Spelling and Grammar: 4
citation: The New York Times. The New York Times. Web. 07 May 2012. .
Evaluation:
The Young and Jobless
Headline-4
supporting detail-3
Who, What, When, Where, why, How-4
Lead sentance-4
Spelling and grammer-4
Zaki, Zunaira. "The Young and The Jobless." ABC News. ABC News Network. Web. 07 May 2012. .
Bibliography- COLLEEN CURRY , . "Arkansas Inmate on Crime Spree Steals Cop's Gun, Shoots His Dog." http://abcnews.go.com. Web. 7 May 2012.
Dermatologist: Don't make fun of 'Tan Mom'
By Dr. Jessica Wu
Headline= 4
Supporting Details= 4
Five W's= 3
Lead Sentence= 3
Spelling/Grammar= 4
Bibliography: Wu, Jessica. "Dermatologist: Don't Make Fun of 'Tan Mom'" HLNtv.com. Turner Broadcasting System Inc., 07 May 2012. Web. 07 May 2012. .
Evaluation:
A Regime's Tight Grip on AIDS
Headline- 3
Supporting details- 4
Who, what, when, where, why, how- 4
Lead sentence- 3
Spelling and grammer- 4
Bib-
The New York Times. The New York Times. Web. 07 May 2012. .
Evaluate:
Headline- 2
Supporting details- 3
Who what when where why how- 3
Lead sentance- 3
Spelling and grammer- 4
"A Regime’s Tight Grip on AIDS." The New York Times. The New York Times. Web. 07 May 2012. .
Evaluation:
Applying Cybertechniques to Urban Problems
Headline- 3
Supporting details- 4
Five W's- 4
Lead sentence- 4
Spelling and grammar- 4
Bio:
Press, the Associated. "Applying Cybertechniques to Urban Problems." the New York Times Business Day Technology. TNYT, 07 May 2012. Web. 07 May 2012
Evaluation:
Applying Cybertechniques to Urban Problems
Headline- 3
Supporting details- 4
Five W's- 4
Lead sentence- 4
Spelling and grammar- 4
Bio:
Press, the Associated. "Applying Cybertechniques to Urban Problems." the New York Times Business Day Technology. TNYT, 07 May 2012. Web. 07 May 2012
Evaluation:
Fat Cat 'Meow' Dies
Headline- 3
Supporting details- 4
Who, what, when, where, why, how- 3
Lead sentence- 4
Spelling and grammar- 4
"Fat Cat ‘Meow’ Dies." http://gma.yahoo.com/blogs/abc-blogs/fat-cat-meow-dies-162743243--abc-news-topstories.html
Evaluation-
Cycle of Fear
Headline-4
Supporting Details-4
Who, What, When, Where, Why, How-3
Lead Sentence-4
Spelling and Grammar-4
Bib-
Kreider, Tim. "Cycle of Fear". www.opinionator.logs.nytimes. May 7th, 2012.
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